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Wednesday, July 6, 2016

My Writing!

Hi it's me Nathan.  This week we have been learning to write the kret waei.

BEFORE:
I think my comment is... too short no capital lettrer and no full stop.

AFTER:


I think my comment is... good because I used capital lettrer,full stop and I used a greeting. |: (
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1 comment:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 7, 2016 at 10:13 AM

    HI Nathan it's Blake from Gilberthorpe school now I know what you like. If you had to pik one of your favorite things what would it be? Next Time You Can tell me why you like it.

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